MMM… Tasty (Submission, Verdict: 1)
You know, the concept of a scoop of ice cream, drizzled in chocolate to represent the world is pretty damn cool. But things quickly go downhill.
A) The tongue looks like… Well, it looks like a Dicentra Spectabilis (aka the Bleeding Heart flower) And it doesn’t look quite like it’s licking, so much as it’s sprouting. It really puts off the entire design.
B) It’s on banana. If you read my thoughts on =rand() [enter], you’ll know just what I think of banana. That’s changed easily enough, though.
C) More definition in the chocolate. Just a bit more, so it looks more like… the earth, I suppose. Oh, and make the whole thing just a titch bigger.
I’m usually not into giving itemized lists of different things the design could improve on, but I really do like the concept. It’s the execution that falters.
Verdict: 1 (View Submission)
Tags: designs, extra tasty, has potential, t shirts, threadless, verdict 1
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